Nowadays, a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet. Is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
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nternet has changed everything. Currently, healthcare Add an article
The
information
is abundant for free on the internet
. From my point of view, this
is a bad thing, because quantity does not mean quality
and there are huge risks related to take
medication without medical supervision.
Change the verb form
taking
Internet
is a virtual space without regulations. Individuals are able to publish whatever they think it
is right. Delete the pronoun
apply
This
leads to increaseVerify preposition usage
in
information
available for using
for several purposes, Change the form of the verb
use
nevertheless
, no one can assure the quality
of this
information
because it is a time consuming
task. Add a hyphen
time-consuming
For instance
, Wikipedia is the biggest online library in all over the world. Thousands of articles are edited every day by thousands of volunteers. However
, there is not an internal or external organization aims to evaluate the quality
of the articles. People could experimentVerify preposition usage
with
on
information
from these type of sources.
Individuals who take medications without professional supervision are at risks. Aas a result of self-medication, our bodies can suffer short-term or long-term consequences such
as headaches and vision problems to name a few. For example
, an american
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American
internet
entrepeneur
called Jhon Chacon started an online business to sell pills in order to improve cognition. He edited many sources of Correct your spelling
entrepreneur
information
on the internet
to promote his false value proposition. He invested on
many influencers and marketing campaigns. Verify preposition usage
in
As a result
, thousands of people bougth
his product. Due to the toxicity of the pills, more than ten young adults died. Correct your spelling
bought
Thus
, searches on i
nternet for Add an article
the
self medication
are risky.
In a nutshell, a lot of healthcare Add a hyphen
self-medication
information
free
available on the Replace the word
freely
internet
is not a positive thing, because the quantity of information
is not the same as the quality
of information
and there are huge risks if individuals decide to take medication under self supervision
.Add a hyphen
self-supervision
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