The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on the contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Abusive crimes news causes several impacts for the news receivers my stance, I believe there are a lot of pros related to
such
as fearfulness, In stark contrast, however
, it gives idea for the news followers to do the crime. Hence
, a group of people consensus that newspapers or television should not broadcast any kind of violent crimes news. Therefore
, aheadAdd the preposition
of
this
, and this
viewpoint will be discussed to reach its logic
conclusion.
There are several Replace the word
logical
reason
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reasons
about
why abusive crimes should be shown Verify preposition usage
apply
in
TV and newspaper. Verify preposition usage
on
Firstly
, it gives some benefits for
us. Because it gives information Verify preposition usage
to
such
as the location, and when was it happen, to make us more aware and more secure. Secondly
, to know how to prevent if this
kind of case is facing us. For instance
, we can keep emergency number earlier, such
as ambulances, polices and hospital. Thirdly
, women are always seen as w
eak subject, in so many cases women are often become the victims. Add an article
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Hence
, as women, we are able to learn the art of self-defence in case it happen
to us in the future.
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happens
On the other hand
, the television still able to broadcast the violent crimes news
with Change to a genitive case
the news of the violent crime
the news of the violent crimes
c
ondition. It can be shown only in some special time. Add an article
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For example
, special for news about crimes can be put in adult hours. This
means,
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apply
t
ime where children Add an article
a
the
is
usually not watching Change the verb form
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TV
, Change the noun form
tvs
such
as late night
hours and dawn times.
To conclude, it is clear that violent crimes news are allowed to be shown Add a hyphen
late-night
in
television and newspaper. Verify preposition usage
on
However
, the positive way to see it and the condition are the main keys that should be underlined. I personally hope that this
essay can be r
ecommendation for people who Add an article
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is disagree
to see abuse crime news both in newspaper and TV.Change the verb form
disagrees
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