"Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree

Even though many people suggest that prevention is better than cure it

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research

for the future. In my opinion ,

research

towards the cause of

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isease is our

first

defence against death

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proper

research

can lead to giant discovery e for the future . It

also

diagnosis the cause of diseases and helps in the prevention and cure even for the future. After all,

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human life is more valuable

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money.

Therefore

the government must not hesitate to invest money in

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ealthcare

sector

and for

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purposes. Another point to consider is that medical

research

and improvement in

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ealth care

sector

advances the economy. To explain coma advancement in

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ealthcare

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of a country results in the attention of

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other countries towards a country which

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to get a positive impact

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the economy. Apart from

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, when

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country

healthcare

is advanced, people from all over the world come in force of the

healthcare

sector

in order to get its benefits.

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, it proves to be a source of income for

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conomy in terms of

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ealthcare

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. To conclude , even if the

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expensive , it's not more valuable

then

the life of mankind .

therefore

I believe that these are vital in order to save

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ives of many as the

last

for economic growth in

this

world.