Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet where as other believe that we can alter our behaviour and prevent future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The environment has been damaged by human's behaviour across the world.

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one part of the population thinks that

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unfortunately

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situation cannot

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it, others have the belief that as

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ociety, people can work together and change their current lifestyle to reduce their CO2 footprint and ensure a better

planet

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decades,

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pollution levels have

increasing

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dramatically in the most popular cities. Countries

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as Australia, the USA, the UK, and China present

espectacular

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spectacular

and modern cities with enormous buildings and

extenses

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expenses

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highways,

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, the reality behind the scene is quite different. In order to create

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attractive images, these countries have exploited the majority natural resources and

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has destroyed the habitat of flora and fauna being the principal producers of contamination and CO2 particles.

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, if people plus to

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dramatic picture the zero awareness of some

indivuals

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individuals

for care our

planet

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, the story is more dreadful. Many citizens do not care changes their lifestyles and continue to smoke or use aerosol cans lacking the possibility to improve the quality of air for the

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generations. Many of them believe that the responsibility

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protect

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the

planet

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is too hard and seems to them an impossible task.

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, new generations are more conscious about

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matter and

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they have been working together to foster changes on

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human behaviour. They strongly believe that a small shift can contribute

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the cause and make the difference.

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, there are many communities which are working to reduce the CO2 produced. Including in their regular

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activities

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as recycling and composting.

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, all the communities of South Australia have diverse courses

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how people can recycle and programs of reforestation. In conclusion,

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uman is the main responsible for environmental problems that many nations are dealing across the world. It could be possible that

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situation

continue

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to happen in the future.

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, I believe as

unhabitant

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inhabitant

inhabitants

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planet

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if people change a little bit their manners, it is possible

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mprove the environmental conditions and protect other species.