Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet where as other believe that we can alter our behaviour and prevent future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The environment has been damaged by human's behaviour across the world.
Although
one part of the population thinks that
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unfortunately
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situation cannot
be stop
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it, others have the belief that as
s
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ociety, people can work together and change their current lifestyle to reduce their CO2 footprint and ensure a better
planet
. In the
last
decades,
the
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pollution levels have
increasing
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dramatically in the most popular cities. Countries
such
as Australia, the USA, the UK, and China present
espectacular
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spectacular
and modern cities with enormous buildings and
extenses
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expenses
extensions
highways,
however
, the reality behind the scene is quite different. In order to create
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attractive images, these countries have exploited the majority natural resources and
also
has destroyed the habitat of flora and fauna being the principal producers of contamination and CO2 particles.
Besides
, if people plus to
this
dramatic picture the zero awareness of some
indivuals
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individuals
for care our
planet
, the story is more dreadful. Many citizens do not care changes their lifestyles and continue to smoke or use aerosol cans lacking the possibility to improve the quality of air for the
next
generations. Many of them believe that the responsibility
of
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protect
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the
planet
is too hard and seems to them an impossible task.
On the other hand
, new generations are more conscious about
this
matter and
also
they have been working together to foster changes on
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human behaviour. They strongly believe that a small shift can contribute
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the cause and make the difference.
For instance
, there are many communities which are working to reduce the CO2 produced. Including in their regular
day
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activities
such
as recycling and composting.
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, all the communities of South Australia have diverse courses
of
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how people can recycle and programs of reforestation. In conclusion,
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uman is the main responsible for environmental problems that many nations are dealing across the world. It could be possible that
this
situation
continue
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to happen in the future.
However
, I believe as
unhabitant
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inhabitant
inhabitants
of
this
planet
if people change a little bit their manners, it is possible
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mprove the environmental conditions and protect other species.
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