The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience , such as juvenile delinquency , arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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been many

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in the role of females in

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society in comparison with 20 years back. Nowadays,teenagers face

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ot of hurdles and commit crime at

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oung age.

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ife focuses on their career and not on

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pbringing of their

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. I strongly agree with the above statement and my inclination is justified

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days concentrate more on their professional life and they forget to look after their kids. When

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happens infants feel lonely

therefore

, they take wrong steps in their life. On top of that, there is no one to correct youngster's mistakes and supervise them.

Hence

, criminal offences are committed by minors.

In addition

, lawbreaking like

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, ragging,

cyber crime

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, etc

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carried out. And if

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teenagers are not disciplined

then

in future when the

child

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, can make a commitment with greater crimes.

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ountry's crime ratio will increase. The solution to

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problem is that mothers should give some time to their

child

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ove and teach them

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ight things.

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, I would not overlook the other side.

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with, there are other influences like from wrong friend circle, the environment they live in and many more. So, wife alone is not the only responsible person for spoiling the behaviour of

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hild. But

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emale can rectify the mistakes and teach

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esson to the young ones. In conclusion, due to

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igh standard of living women stay all day into their work which leads to

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rong impact

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their kids.