Sports events such as Formula One and other car racing events should be banned because they are unnecessary waste of money and create more pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Formula one is a big racing

car

event, and

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have been increasingly drawing

publics

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attention over the years.

Although

this

modality brings great benefits to our society,

likewise

,

g

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eneration of jobs and leisure time to population. Some

argues

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saying that it generates an excessive amount of pollution,

besides

being an unwise way of spending money.

Therefore

, it should be banned. I have dissenting views with

this

group,

on

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the following essay, I will be

further

explaining why I disagree with

this

statement.

First

and foremost, racing

car

events

has

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a huge

contribuition

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contribution

to the economy, generating direct and

undirect

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indirect

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employments.

For example

, a research made by the University of Michigan

,

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stated that revenue generated by

this

industry

last

year in France

,

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accounted for over 5% of the countries total.

Furthermore

, watching

this

modality it is

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eisure activity for a big part of our society, and it is already intrinsic

on

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its habits.

Although

, there is no doubt about the excessive amount of pollution that these events generate. There are better ways to deal with

this

matter.

Likewise

, Governments should be stricter to

this

particular type of

car

companies.

For example

, it should only allow a reasonable amount of greenhouse emission per

car

and should require that companies separate a percentage of its profit to study newer ways of implementing

a

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cleaner energy. To conclude, racing

car

events

has

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a great impact on

e

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conomy

besides

being a great way of entertainment to the overall population. For

this

reason, I restate my point of view that they should not be banned