Some people believe that universities should only offer places to young students who receive high marks at school. Others think that universities should offer a place to anyone of any age. Discuss and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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crimes of
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the whole period. By 2003, under 3500 burglary incidents were registered in Newport city.
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increased slightly in the following year, it remained almost stable. At the end of the period, only under 1500 incidents accounted for burglary. The
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of robbery crimes was the lowest within all the categories, it seated at over 500 incidents. From 2005 onward,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic ability
  • rigorous university environment
  • prestige
  • lifelong learning
  • diverse perspectives
  • life experiences
  • resilience
  • unique talents
  • innovation
  • dynamic classroom
  • inclusive classroom
  • mentorship
  • collaborative learning
  • discriminatory
  • access to education
  • equity
  • inclusion
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