In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of people are
prefering
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preferring
today to eat fast
food
instead
of a traditional kitchen
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their countries. From my point of view, it has a lot of disadvantages
such
as
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issues
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an
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issues with citizen's health and a loss of national culture. It is argued that
such
food
as hot dogs or pizza
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a negative effect on our bodies. Obviously, eating
this
all the time will probably increase
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level of possibility to get different illnesses
such
as
diabet
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diabetes
for instance
.
Moreover
, trying to save some money by eating fast
food
people will spend much more on their health in the future.
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SA is a good example of the popularity of fast
food
. Millions of people there are suffering from overweight and
diabet
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diabetes
just because fast
food
is a part of their culture. The
second
negative impacts
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globalization. Every nation has
their
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own history and a kitchen is a huge part of it. Different recipes of
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dishes can give us
an
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interesting information about
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volution of
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society.
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, we all know that sushi is a traditional dish from Japan and it has fish inside because Japan has o lot of fish. At the same time,
italians
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prefer
spagetti
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spaghetti
and it is
also
a huge part of their legacy in
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world culture. Fast
food
can tell us nothing Replacing
a
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traditional
food
by burgers and hot dogs has a strongly negative effect on society in general.
This
trend has more disadvantages than advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Impact
  • Nutritious
  • Cultural heritage
  • Identity
  • Economic implications
  • Locally sourced
  • Social cohesion
  • Environmental degradation
  • Obesity
  • Heart diseases
  • Diabetes
  • Cultural transmission
  • Convenience
  • Traditional dishes
  • Biodiversity
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