Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

These days, Globe is encountering enormous problems and become
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epressed place. Nations would be seen some serious issues like population,education and global warming in the
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. The nearly ten years are really hard for humans who are swamped with their activities and they can not make attention on global warming , rising birth rates and academics.
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, air pollution and climate change have been evolving for several years. Well,
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ir is polluted by emitting the carbon dioxide which is too much in
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tmosphere. Carbon dioxide has
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have pushed up it.
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uman population grow rapidly worldwide. It affects on natural resources like water, land and food which will be consumed by mankind and it makes the sources desolate in the future.
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ducation sector ;
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istraction by using electrical outlets.
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, during the lessons, students tune out the class and spend time checking social media and playing video games. So it is
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impossible to eliminate the problems rapidly , there are several ways to thin out in future.
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renewable energy, reforestation and reduce emission by using solar panels, replanting the land with huge plants and trees.Nowadays, people have started to educate their girls which is better for declining the birth rates.
Hence
, women can be empowered to control their reproduction and gain access to education.
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social media applications and video games while learning on
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omputer or other electric
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chool should more focus on traditional learning than online studies. In conclusion,
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uman can save the world from crucial problems by stopping
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activities
and create a new world. In my opinion, everyone should take
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their countries and make the globe flawless.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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