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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less. You should write at least 250 words.

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people are having progressively increased
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umber of sugary drinks. With the development of technology and production, sugar became one of the most usable
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ood industry.  The main reason
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 increasing the amount of sugar-based drinks and energetics is people's hasty and busy lifestyle. Endless projects, webinars and deadlines make a severe pressure on a daily schedule. People drink a lot of coffee and energetics
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 because obligations and important plans don't leave enough space to healthy sleep regimen.
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1st century. Sugar is not only found in sweet drinks and cakes, even cheese, mayonnaise and regular bread has
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 "white poison". In fact, sugar is the foremost reason why people love fast food, coke and cupcakes so much. People prefer sweet drinks to regular water
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 because it gives us a feeling of quenching thirst and happiness, but in fact
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we want to drink more and more. To solve
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 people more educated about health. People may do not have
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knowledge about the harm of sugar-based drinks and their impact on their health
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