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The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The improvement of technology engenders a revolution on
food
 supply which brings worldwide consumers more choices and better quality in agriculture products. While agreeing
such
 kind of enhancement may result in a higher
successful
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 rate for planting, people
also
 highlighted its harm to eco-system when genetic modification happened. On
the
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one's side, the improvement of people’s living standards is found because of scientific
food
. Every farmer needs numerous problems during farming, no matter extreme weather or pests. Uncertainty will lower the success rate of crops, yet technological invention becomes the solution for them.
In particular
, the greenhouse provides an ideal environment for vegetables and make improvement on
food
 nutrition. Not only metropolitan can benefit from it, but
also
 dwellers in developing countries can access to a stable and rich
food
 supply.
Hence
, children’s life
expectacy
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expectancy
 extended. On the other’s side, the eco-system is possibly damaged by the raise of DNA
food
. In order to ensure crop growth rate in extreme
habitals
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habitats
habits
, weak parts in crops that have been classified as “failure” are now removed from
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 modified crops or animals.
Thus
, the difficulties for striking a balance in the
food
 chain increase and certain creatures may become stronger in the natural environment. In case pesticide is taken into account, other insects are possibly facing a lack of
food
 so their number decrease.
Consequently
, ripple effects exist and it is hard to control insects’ competitors in the future. In conclusion, I think technological and scientific advances in agriculture bring people a stable
food
 supply by withdrawing limitation on extreme growing habitats.
However
, genetic modification can be extremely harmful to nature.
Therefore
, scientists should control the usage of DNA
food
. A wiser decision is needed to be taken in order to protect our future good.
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