last sunday you flew from london to vancouver . when you arrived home you discovered that you had left your han luggge on the airplane where and when you lost what your bag looks like what its contents were.

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Dear Sir or Madam. My name is Marcel and I was one of the passengers on the flight AC9817 which arrived on
vancouver
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last
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. The reason that I am
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writing
this
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letter
is regards
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to the fact that I had realized that I had arrived home that I left my hand luggage on the
airplane
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aeroplane
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. If it helps the features of my case is very
incommon
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in common
uncommon
. It is a small size in green and
yelow
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yellow
and
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has two stripes around it. It resembles
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Brazil's flag;
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, it is not hard to
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loose
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sight. It is important to mention that there was my passport inside the front pocket.
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, it had
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my
credicards
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credit cards
and roughly two hundred dollars.
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, it is my
passaport
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passport
that really
converns
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concerns
me as the most important document I have abroad. Hope you can find it and if not I will have to go to my
countries'embassy
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countries embassy
in order to inform them about my
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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely. Marcel Machado
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