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In recent years , more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages ?

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Nowadays, the majority of people prefer to flip through the pages within digital books. I believe that the benefits of e-books, in the term of occupying physical space, easy access and availability outweigh its drawbacks. On the one hand, I acknowledge that not only are electronic books
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 mitigate a few jobs.
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, many public libraries closed down their doors because of the shortage of
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, people who
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 in those venues had been lost their careers.
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, physical books should be much
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 rather than quantity to attract the reader.
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, despite the downsides to utilizing technology books, I believe the reasons to rely on them.
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e-books can be stored on CDs or downloaded within seconds in gadgets. While printing books need extra rooms to store them. Take kindle,
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 of books at the same time and reader able to access the same whenever required.
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, electronic are eco-friendly because they do not require
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, no trees to be cut to produce
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, online books have
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 for
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saving rooms. To conclude,
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 printing books are less likely to be stolen than
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 do not strain customer’s eyes beside lessen inertia and provide more careers. I believe the merits of reading books on electronic devices clearly outweigh the disadvantages

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