Some people think that they have the right to use as much as fresh water they want, others believe government should control the use of water as it limited sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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ssential need of human being without
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life is not possible . Some individual
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that ministry should limit the use of
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water
as it is limited .
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believe that people have the human right to use as much
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water
as they want as it is
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ree source .
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essay will discuss both
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of the
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and why
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overnment need to control the use of
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. On the
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ree source of nature and available for everyone .Our basic daily needs are based on
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. On the adverse side ,
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water
resources are very limited. The continues wastage of
water
reduce
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the
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level. Soon it
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be the time when
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water
will be
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