Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To agree or Disagree with the statement whether the state should spend more capital on the arts and structures to improve

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living pl is an important issue. putting the discussion

on

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wider context, many

people

agree

to

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the statement that the

government

should spend more money to make cities more attractive by spending money on arts and crafts.

i

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wholeheartedly believe that the

government

should focus on the other aspects which are more important to provide

better

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a better

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and

safe

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safer

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place

for

living

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.

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against

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that will be presented. on the one hand, many

people

agree that

,

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the

government

should spend the majority of their

fund

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funds

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to improve the infrastructure of the

city

so that, the increasing population can

accommodate

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efficiently.

for instance

,

construction

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the construction

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of wider roads and

implementing

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signals

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of signals

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across the

city

can be helpful

to control

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raising

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traffic in the urban area. which is one of the important

concern

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concerns

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nowadays.

apart from

this

, the

government

administration should

also

invest the

fund

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funds

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in improving safety

feature

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features

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across the

city

.

for

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example authority should invest

wage

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wages

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in instaling surveillance

camera

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cameras

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across the local area which, could be helpful

to regulate

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unlawful activity.

on the other hand

, few

people

disagree with the statement for many reasons. The most important one is that the

government

should

also

pay attention to the

city

's ambience to make the

city

more

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a more

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attractive and livable

place

.

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of, spending the majority of

fund

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funds

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toward safety and infrastructure.

for example

, the installation of statues of various known

people

will help locals to remember

good

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the good

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deeds of their heroes.

therefore

spending money toward the restoration of the historic structure is equally important. In

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conclusion,

while

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many

people

vary their

view

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views

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about how the

government

should spend their

fund

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funds

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. I strongly believe that investing more capital

on

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infrastructure and safety is the ideal way to make the

city

more

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a more

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livable and safe

place

for

people

.

however

, The beauty of a

place

is equally important and cannot be ignored