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Modern culture around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons. Is it a positive development or a negative development, in your opinion.

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There is no question that the process of
the
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globalisation has changed the
ives
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lives
 of myriads. The popular belief is that the traditional features of each
country
also
 have undergone tremendous changes owing to modern developments. In my view, these changes are mostly adverse and in
this
 essay, I'm willing to provide causes of
this
 trend and reasons to support my opinion. There are certain factors of differences narrowing between nations.
To begin
, it is undeniable that, marketing encourages consumers to utilize the same dairy products despite their location and cultural preferences. A case in point would be the rapid spread of fast food, people influenced by
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 eat hamburgers and sandwiches
instead
 of their traditional dishes.
Furthermore
, it became popular to travel abroad, where tourists and citizens of a
hosting
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country
 experience the exchange of customs and traditions.
Last
 but not least, nowadays people started to live in nuclear
family
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instead
 of living in communities.
Therefore
, the older generation can not transfer their customs to the younger
one's
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. In turn to demerits of culture similarity,I can provide the following arguments. Countries which emulate features of others' are likely to lose their zest and become unattractive
for
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 tourists.
For instance
, India is famous for its rich cultural heritage;
therefore
, travellers from all
other
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over
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 the world are dreaming
to explore
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this
country
. In recent years,
however
, a vast modern development of the
country
 has influenced the flow of visitors as many of them now choose more authentic places.
Secondly
, the
country
 disappears when citizens forget
it's
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its
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 culture. National holidays and customs unite people of one
country
 as they
gathering
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 together to celebrate them. Remembering events which were precursors to a particular holiday, they
rise
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 their sense of patriotism. In conclusion, it is possible to say that marketing, tourism and nuclear families gave birth to
cultures
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identity. In my opinion,
this
 is a negative trend as the countries
seems
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 to lose their uniqueness and patriotism.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Globalization
  • Multinational corporations
  • Consumerism
  • Cross-cultural interactions
  • Cultural diversity
  • Communication technologies
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Global community
  • Cultural richness
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