Do children behave better when they are physical punished or rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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a shift for better

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when they are physically punished or rewarded,

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both the techniques have their advantages and disadvantages. In

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essay, I will discuss both views of the argument and explain my support for the former view. Nowadays, modern parents struggle to find

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time and energy to discipline their

child

. Due to their strenuous jobs, often times the attention is divided.

As a result

, the offspring gets the

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of the stick. In

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ituation where bad conduct is exhibited by the

child

,

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of providing the right guidance of correction because of the lack of enthusiasm , the mother and father

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to provide a gift, hoping that the

behaviour

improves.

For instance

, in a home environment, if the adolescent is creating a fuss for unnecessary reasons,

instead

of correcting the

child

, parents would offer unhealthy treats

such

as chocolates or candies in order them to stop acting the way they are. All that the

child

learnt was that, if they conduct in an improper manner, that results in goodies. In the past, parents used a variety

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physical punishment techniques in order

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orrect their youngsters. From the use of a stick

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to the scale.

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resulted in realisation, which led to

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improved

behaviour

for the long run. To illustrate

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point, I would like to share a time from my childhood. Whenever I would throw a fit and chuck all my toys around, the

next

moment I received a knock of my back. It wasn't a pleasant experience or memory, but I learnt not to fling things around. In my opinion, the mother and father are equally responsible in enabling their kids to realise their mistakes and

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possible only by a form of

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tangible

punishment which will lead to a long-term improved

behaviour

,

instead

of relying on temporary solutions based on rewards.