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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Paradise Island have had from the past to the present days. Overall, there has been a massive growth in the Paradise Island resources. Today, there are new facilities and areas that might boost tourism activities
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 the Island. In the past, the paradise island only had few features and facilities. It had a beach area where swimming was not
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the Island had a natural spring just in the North-west
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 been significant changes in the Island with the construction of new facilities. The pier has been expanded and now, cruise ships are able to dock in the Island. The Scientific
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overweight
  • obesity
  • caloric intake
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • screen time
  • physical education
  • nutritious
  • psychological well-being
  • self-esteem
  • socioeconomic
  • healthcare system
  • life expectancy
  • obesity-related complications
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