Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People argue that the most serious
enviromental
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environmental
issue is the disappearance of specific
species
of flora and fauna while some others believe that numerous alarming natural problems should be more concerned. I agree with
this
latter view and discuss in the following essay. On the one hand, people who consider the loss of particular of animals is
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ajor question to cope with due to being aware of
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egative impact on our life as well as biodiversity.
For example
, cutting trees, damaging forest for
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agricultural
agriculture
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the habitat of animals would be limit or disappear which lead to the reduction of a large of
species
.
Besides
, the shortage of forest would not enough produce oxygen for people. Another consequence is both flora and fauna have
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reat contribution to researching and applying in some areas.
For example
, in medical science, many insects or animal are made use of disease treatment for human. Thereby, If various
species
are at risk,
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of people will be certainly serious affected.
On the other hand
, people who said that more urgent environmental problems should be
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conscious
since nature
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hard and intense. It could be said that climate change is a pressing issue which
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receiving significant concerns from all people over the world. Disasters natural, like
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arthquake in Japan and storms in VietNam which occur frequently and constantly in recent years.
This
causes
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of deaths annually that affect directly to people as well as the development of each nation.
In addition
, contamination is
also
an alarming issue because of bad effects on the health of
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such
as lung cancer or stress. We are facing
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bad situation like pollution in air, water, land. In conclusion,
although
contamination and climate change are not novel issues, it still a controversial thing whenever it mentioned and it should be raised aware of largely to protect the life of
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uman as well as
species
existing in the planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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