People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less. You should write at least 250 words

(Intro)Nowadays , there

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increasing number of people who drink soda.

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is a serious issue

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because it influences on mental health and quality of life.

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essay will consider the main causes of having sugar-based drinks, before proposing two possible resolutions. (Body a)Perhaps the most important cause of

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problem is a spread of these

sugar –based

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drinks by advertising(advertising signs on the streets, by advertising on

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and on websites). People notice them, because of their attractive design and decide to buy them. Another key factor is

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ack of healthy eating education.

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means, that people do not know about

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armful

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effects

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of

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type of drinks.

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, they continue to use them for suppression of thirst. (Body b)Fortunately,

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, there are two promising solutions to

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problem.

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of all, governments should prohibit showing advertisings on

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. It may help to reduce

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spread of these products.

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, mostly, older people who watch

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will stop drinking sodas.

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, professionals and parents could tell about bad impacts of sugar-based drinks on people 's physical and mental health ,

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, suggest kids

an alternative ways

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of choosing products, which would

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reduce bad habits and help to take control of their nutrition.

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, dieticians can recommend a way of replacing coke with water. (Conclusion) In conclusion, having sugar-based drinks is a major challenge which is primarily caused by low levels of health education, along with

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pread of these drinks among people of any ages by advertisings . I recommend that governments reduce

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issue by banning advertising of these unhealthy products on

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and adults with specialists will do it by providing different ways of selecting healthier products and cutting down unhealthy habits.