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Some people suggest that international news should be studied as a subject in secondary school. however, others say that it will be a wastage of valuable school time? discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is undeniable to say that the educational institutes have been playing an incredible role to educate the students. The
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curriculum
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 is jam-packed with a plethora of courses. Remarkable individuals advocate that worldwide newscast should be made obligatory in educational institutions. Whereas a few opine that it is solely a wastage of academic hours.
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 about worldwide social, cultural and educational activities serves a great benefit. Because if students exactly know about what is happening around them and
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 takes interest in these fields,
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 it would be easy for those who want to opt for any foreign country to pursue their higher studies. It gives a clear perception and
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 to differentiate both the cultures, traditions and the weather as well. In
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 way, it could become sustainable in the long run but it completely depends on the interest of students whether they want to gain
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 on that or not.
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 of people have a different narrative for
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 concern. Because the
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curriculum
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 is already overloaded with
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yriad of programs and to add up one more will pose huge stress on the learners.
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, it is already difficult for the learners to finish their assignments and
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equired time. So, it would be unnecessary to add up one more subject in the
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, schools should make general
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 as
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part of their
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 as it is more important for the hostile development of a student. In conclusion,
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 international news help students to boost their
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 about worldwide affairs and it could be helpful for them in the long run,
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, in the high
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 studies, learners should be more indulged towards their core subjects rather than non-
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 programs for their academic development.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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