Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool.Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Video games
has
evolved a lot in the recent past, during my childhood I used to play snake games in the basic mobile phone, now we have Change the verb form
have
high end
games with Add a hyphen
high-end
l
ot of graphics in the mobile phones. It is Change the article
a
f
act that many are getting addicted Add an article
a
for
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to
the
mobile games. Obviously, it Remove the article
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bring
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brings
n
egative effect Add an article
a
in
one's character.
On one hand, we have mind games Verify preposition usage
on
to
such
as sudoku, chess and other mathematical games which will boost our computative ability. Also
, there are many new Add a hyphen
start-up
start
up companies has Change to a plural noun
starts
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arisen
raised
arised
in the recent past, that teaches children lessons with the help of games. It is evident from Correct your spelling
arisen
such
company's growth results that, this
type of educative games has received a
huge support from parents who struggle to teach their kids about the school lessons.
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However
, we cannot deny the fact that,
youngsters are very much addicted to Remove the comma
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the
video games. Some games even induce violence in their minds, Remove the article
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for example
, wrestling games. Which makes them to
try wrestling techniques with their fellow kids. We cannot Change the verb form
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forgot
about the news thatChange the verb form
forget
,
many kids have attempted suicide after getting addicted to blue whale game. Remove the comma
apply
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are
no Change the verb form
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any
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exaggregration
but the truth. Many universities and schools Correct your spelling
exaggeration
has
banned playing PUB-G game Change the verb form
have
in
their campus as many students were addicted to it. Not only kids and youngsters, even grown adults are addicted to Verify preposition usage
on
such
games and spending their hard earned
money for online purchasing of useless Add a hyphen
hard-earned
game related
accessories.
To conclude my point, It would be better for all the Add a hyphen
game-related
goverments
to Correct your spelling
governments
government
supress
the addictive video games and ask their fellow citizens to avoid playing video games. It would be better if we promote outdoor games which will help to improve one's fitness.Correct your spelling
suppress
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