many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. to what extent do you agree?

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interacting with people have a great impact on our daily life.
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ebatable view that utilization of online platforms
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etrimental effect on a person and a
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. I strongly agree with
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view as these tools not only detach the population from social gathering but
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plays a vital role in spreading negative rumours in the region which results in riots and communalism. Nowadays, each individual has a close
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attachment
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these social application
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.
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results in disconnecting them from their close relatives, friends and family members. More so, it has been observed that people are now opting for virtual gathering with the
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of these tools
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of social gatherings which leads to
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ownfall of social life.
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, an article in - "The Times" stated that 70% decreased has been noted in family gathering in farmhouses and banquets as
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ommunity now prefer to do virtual functions to save the time and money.
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, these online solutions are creating a huge gap within the
community
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. Along with
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, the word of mouth plays a pivotal role in spreading unnecessary
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rumours
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in the state. Due to which there is a high chance of
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riots and unrest in the province. Nowadays, people have a strong belief that whatever comes on
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nternet is true in nature. Henceforth, they react instantly on whatever article or news comes on online platforms
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twitter
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,
facebook
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,
watsapp
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WhatsApp
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and others.
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, it has been reported that 60% religious or communal unrest had happened
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because
of false news circulated by anti-social elements using these applications. Henceforth, these online platforms are the easy source of creating false news and stress in
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society. In conclusion, few of the people think that consuming
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online application
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as Facebook and others has an unpleasant effect on the region. I stand by with
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view because as mentioned, it creates a considerable social gap between families and
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the offenders to
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chaos in the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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