Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money can be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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good

money

and which not. Some people

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that government are over investing

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in arts rather that

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else. I

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disagree with

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that point of view. To commence with arts is connect

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uman body to soul. The best example is singing, the words in the song and the music has

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ower to improve the person mind and thinking.

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listen

song every day

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faster and well.

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to fight for them.

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theories and fact

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that music has

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ower to change a

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life.

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,

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are affect

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the people mind

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relatively

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of information in it without speaking.

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, The drawings are

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essential

from the stone age. where any person can understand the logic or story without knowing the language.

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is the best evolution of the humankind, without

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this

sector

we cannot know are history and information.

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is help

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us to gets

in

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advanced in any

field

.

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especially in science.

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needs a huge amount of

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to explore a new thing.

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is very hard to get that

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overnment in short term. Which is extend the time to discover new thing because of lack of

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ood understanding of numerous of

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ector and they know which

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needs how much

money

or how to distributed equal

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according

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importance of

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ield.