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In some countries young people are enncourage to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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It is true to say
that is
 a number of countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting educational institution studies these days.
Although
this
 brings positive effects, there are some negative effects that we should consider.
This
 essay will analyse the pros and cons of
this
 issue On the one hand
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it is obvious that there are many significant advantages of working and travelling after graduating from high institute.One of the major plus points is that young people gain a lot of experience and social knowledge.
In other words
, when people are in high university, they live under
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rotected home environment, in the case of any problem, they can seek parents and friends help and advice.But when they travel, they are on their own and if they face any problem, they will learn to deal with it.Needless to say
this
 not only gives them the experience to deal with tough situations later in their life but
also
 gives them confidence
On the other hand
, there are some adverse consequences that need to be taken into consideration.One of the serious problems is that the education process will be disrupted.The student might
forgot
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 some essential knowledge,
such
such
 as physics and mathematics which is usually needed in the University.
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, students can face some difficulties when they came back to the university.Undoubtedly some people would think that completes the academic studies education is not really necessary as long as the money is available In conclusion,it can be said that there are both positives and negatives of taking a year gap between the high school and the university.My personal view is that the advantages far outweigh the problems. It is advised that it should be encouraged for young people to work and travel for a year between finishing high school and starting academic studies so they can build a better life for their future
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