Some people believe that in 100 years time life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?

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Researchers and scientists are trying hard to improve
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ifestyles of people. As
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life
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become easier over the past few decades, it can be assumed that it will become easier in the coming century. Since
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these advancements brought some negative aspects with it, it is thought by some people that in future these aspects will overcome the luxuries, we have now, and
life
will not be as pleasurable as it is now.
For
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, our natural resources are depleting exponentially and we are facing extreme climate changes. I believe that considering the advancements in technology,
life
will be much easier in the future;
however
, these adverse effects can not be ignored.
To begin
with, scientists have invented so many things, which make the
life
of an individual easier, and they are updating everything with new technology.
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hone was invented almost two centuries ago but with
time
researchers have improved it tremendously. Because of these improvements, we can do almost everything with the help of our phone. In the beginning, people could only talk with their phones but now they can take pictures, use
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nternet, pay their bills and watch movies on their phones.
Furthermore
, scientists have made so many advances in health care;
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iagnosis of diseases has become easier and treatments as well. Due to these researches, new medicines are being introduced in the market, which
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health care more reliable than ever before.
For
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, doctors now can get the diagnostic test results within hours, which in return help the people and make their treatments
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, inventions like robots and artificial intelligence
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brought so much ease in
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ives of people. It has reduced the labour work tremendously.
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, there are restaurants in some countries, which are using robots to do all the labour work ;
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ives of many people.
Although
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ives of people will be easier in
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undred years, it will bring many negative aspects with them. As
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time
is passing, people are consuming more natural resources.
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, scientist
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declared that consumable water resources are declining with
time
.
Moreover
, fossil fuels have reduced tremendously;
therefore
, there will be
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hortage of fuel in future.
Furthermore
, because of these machines and cars,
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arth is facing climate changes, which will increase with
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undred years. To conclude,
although
scientists brought ease in
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ives of people, and their researches will bring more convenience in many people’s lives in the coming century, it will bring adverse effects with it.
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undred years, they are not wrong.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Life expectancy
  • Eradicate
  • Automation
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Environmental damage
  • Global education systems
  • Literacy rates
  • Social policies
  • Quality of life
  • Privacy concerns
  • Job displacement
  • Digital divide
  • Economic disparities
  • Social unrest
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