Some lm companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

Film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single
movie
. Some of them are a hit and others struggle to survive at the box office. Movies with a good script and a storyline
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very rare these days. Movies
also
tend to be more commercial. Companies invest a lot of
money
on good locations, fancy cars, good cast etc. Among all these
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they sometimes forget about, whether the
movie
will be a big hit or not, whether the
money
invested will be worth it or not. I think spending a lot of
money
to make a good
movie
is really not necessary. There are many
films
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who have a really low production cost but earn big
money
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ox office. I remember watching
this
Bollywood
movie
“Jane Tu Ya Jane Na”.
This
was a low budget
movie
. I recall the lead actors saying that they just had one van for their make-up, nobody had their own vans. Everybody was
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like one giant family. To everybody’s surprise
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the
movie
was a big hit and earned millions. I think the most important factor that
contribute
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to the success of the
movie
is storyline and acting. The story should reach the audiences and make an impact on them in a good way. Acting is
also
important because the actors are the real characters that reach the audiences. It is important how the
movie
can connect with the audience.
Therefore
, I think that it is not all necessary to spend millions of dollars in the production of the
movie
. What matters is how deep and meaningful a
movie
is, and how it can make an impact on the audience.
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