Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the onset of modernization, the education sector has

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studying online on a screen have its benefits, it reduces the efficiency of learning for the students. In my opinion

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studying on a computer is not at all beneficial compared to children going to

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for academics. By all means, students who study with other students tend to learn things more efficiently, if they physically meet their friends. The purpose of

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more skills and knowledge from physically studying with other students in the classroom as they enjoy and learn with their friends. Despite

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the fact that online learning can save time and can protect children from contagious and infectious diseases, it cannot replace the

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chool. Because there are certain aspects like the discipline and focus which might not be achieved by everyone by attending classes online.

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, children usually cannot concentrate more on a computer and tend to give in for the temptation of playing video games or surf social media during class if not monitored by their parents. In conclusion,

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online classes are beneficial up to a certain aspect for a limited period of time only. Online sessions shall only be conducted during public health emergencies or in optional subjects on certain days of the week as it is a good way to keep students engaged in studies during harsh times.