I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I, SYED HADI ALI holding passport number KX1801313 would like to travel to Turkey for tourism purpose for 9 days, as I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey. Please find the visa application form properly filled and signed along with the valid passport, Photographs and the relevant documents for your review. All the expenses will be borne by me on

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

82 words

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I am on holidays visiting Pakistan from Saudia Arabia and now wishes to visit Turkey.

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