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rovided diagrams illustrate information on the location options and the design of a wave-energy machine.

rovided diagrams illustrate information on the location options and the design of a wave-energy machine.
#diagrams #information #location #options #design #wave-energy #machine
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Provided diagrams illustrate information on the location options and the design of a wave-
energy
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machine
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.
Overall
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, given design for a renewable
energy
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machine
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 using waves is a manmade, cyclical process which has two essential stages, starting with increasing water levels and ending up as electrical
energy
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 in
electricity
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an electricity
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 generator. It can be clearly observed that the
machine
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 was constructed
in
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on
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opposing
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the opposing
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side
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sides
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 of
sea
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the sea
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 wave direction in order to let the water easily enter the device. By increasing
water
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the water
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 level, the
air flow
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airflow
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 in the first chamber moves to the
second
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 one, where it passes through the turbine and leaves the
machine
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 from the upper
side
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 of the chamber.
Air flow
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Airflow
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 piercing from the
second
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 chamber’s left
side
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 entrance from above goes in the direction of the turbine, too. Here the propeller starts to work and generates
the
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electrical
energy
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. It is obvious that there are two options for the location of the
machine
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 with high output and low output, respectively in the large wave zone and small wave zone.
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, installation costs of
such
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a
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apply
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non-traditional
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energy producing
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energy-producing
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 equipment
also
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 differ from each other, regarding their position, since it is low in the area of small waves
next
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 to the coastal
side
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 and high in the area of large waves.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, energy, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 6 times.
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