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Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a country or an institution. Discuss both modes of work and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, selecting a career is the biggest challenge for everyone. Few of the people believe that it is better to do business
instead
 of working in a company. One the one hand, trading entitles with flexible timings along with immense earning opportunities,
on the other hand
, employment provides fixed payment and involves
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igid
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rigid
 work schedule. In my opinion, the benefits of owning a firm supersede the benefits of working for someone. The profession we select should provide financial freedom along with flexible timings. With own merchandise, a person can achieve both because there is no limitation on how much an individual can earn being an owner of the
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profession
professional
 and more so, independence in job timings, helps them to enjoy quality time with their friends and family.
For instance
, an article in “The Times”- stated that out of
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otal global population, 70% of them are those that have their own industries.
On the other hand
, employment gives you secure money for living but with
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ixed
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fixed
mixed
 job schedule. The result of which, mankind can raise limited income in his entire life and being strict work hours, they fail to spend much time with their close relatives.
For example
, a survey done by “Harvard University” stated that the
ajority
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majority
 of people working in a company or a firm, spend only 10% of their life with their wife and children. Henceforth, keeping above discussion into consideration, in my opinion,
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erson’s
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person's
 establishment has an edge over the fixed pay-check assignments due to endless economic growth opportunities plus allow adequate free time with loved ones. In conclusion, a portion of the
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generation
 has a belief that doing commerce benefits more than
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ontractual task for an organization. I do agree with
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wn profession provides a massive chance to earn money along with flexible-timings.
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