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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

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Many people are buying cars in new emerging countries for their daily travelling.
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umber of vehicles can lead to dangerous
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environmental
 conditions and the only viable solution to
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 is providing and promoting public transport. The principal problem
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 causes in developing countries face is global warming as well as misuse of the resources.
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 is to say that, due to increasing car population overall consumption of fossil fuels increases with the passage of time which results in
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ignificant rise in pollution as well as
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overnment need to import the fuel from other countries in order to meet their requirement.
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ncrease in vehicles demand. A solution to
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 problem is providing a proper public transportation system and the government should launch a
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 awareness campaign in media and offices, to promote the use of public transport.
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 could solve the problem by reducing the carbon emission and
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atural resource. A recent example of
this
 is the United States government policy, where they introduced new speed trains for public movement,
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 leads to $30 billion saving annually by the state in means of fuel. Another study shows that
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 save time to reach offices In conclusion,
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ncrease in car sale can cause
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environment
 and health problems in
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future
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they can be overcome by upgrading and promoting public transportation service.
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