Given maps illustrate information on how Frenton changed over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High Street passing through the Frenton from south to north and on both sides of the street there are some public buildings, houses and flats.
Given maps illustrate information on how Frenton changed over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High
Street
passing through the Frenton from south to north and on both sides of the street
there are some public buildings, houses and Add a comma
,street
flats
. Overall
, the town seems to be tremendously transformed over the given time period with the removal of trees, plunged quantity of flats
and replacement of old public buildings with some modern ones.
It can clearly be observed that the population has experienced a great increase, that seems to be the reason why the previous places of houses and ex-playing fields with trees have been replaced with new blocks of flats
. Moreover
, there is a new area
for flats
in the north-east of High
Correct article usage
the High
Street
which is located next
to the new Hotel and golf course, built in the previous area
of café
and park.
Unfortunately, the Correct article usage
the café
area
for trees in south-west
of Add an article
the south-west
High
Correct article usage
the High
Street
have
been used for the construction of a technopark and parallelly on the other side of the same Change the verb form
has
street
a new cinema have
replaced the theatre and shops have been replaced with a supermarket.
Change the verb form
has
Furthermore
, hospital
seems to have a larger Add an article
the hospital
area
rather than it had before, and a new restaurant have
been built in the place of the bank’s building, but the size of it is a little larger. Interestingly, only Change the verb form
has
Correct article usage
the school
school
and Fix the agreement mistake
schools
library
occur to be in the same location with the same dimensions.Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
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