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more and more people tend to procrastinate in tasks these days. Some people think procrastination is the prime reason for the failure in life. Do you agree or disagree?

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Procrastination
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 is putting off doing something out of casual carelessness or common laziness. Owing to
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 reason, many consider it to be the reason for failure in life.
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 essay will discuss how it has an adverse impact on our lives.
One
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 major reason why
procrastination
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 can be considered beneficial is that it teaches
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 to handle work pressure. It enables
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 to manage tasks in a limited amount of time.
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, for someone who is used to doing
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 in
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 way, at
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 minute, it won't be a problem if he is asked to make changes to report at the
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 moment as he would be good at dealing
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 pressure, and
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 the quality of his work would not get compromised as well.
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, sometimes putting off tasks deliberately, gives us time to think about the other convenient and efficient ways in which the duty can be performed.
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,
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 is believed to have adverse effects
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 the majority of people. The stress of delaying might result in anxiety or nervousness.
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, a person might start to feel he won't be able to complete his work in a timely manner.
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 would lead to a lack of confidence which would eventually lead to the duty quality being suffered.
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,
procrastination
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 is only good until it doesn't become a habit and individuals should learn how to procrastinate wisely and in moderation. In my opinion,
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 it can have some positive outcomes,
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 can not deny the detrimental effects of it.

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Coherence and Cohesion
The essay addresses the prompt but lacks clarity and depth in its analysis. It presents relevant ideas and examples, but they need to be further developed and connected more cohesively.
Task Achievement
The introduction and conclusion are present, but they lack complexity and depth. The essay needs to provide a more comprehensive and nuanced response to the prompt, supported by in-depth analysis and examples.

Your opinion

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