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A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.

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In most college and universities, men dominate women in the population. To have a great reputation, the universities should give women a chance to at least participate.
This
 essay will discuss to what extent
this
 situation is true.
To begin
 with, there is no point in disregarding the fact that men mostly dominate women in almost all the universities.Women
on the other hand
 do not even get a chance in having there fair share of education.
This
 can
further
 lead to a bad reputation for the institute. To prevent
this
, universities should help them in many ways,
for instance
, they can fund
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primary and secondary education for them so that they can be better.
On the other hand
, the potential should be considered rather than the gender to be a better student in a university. As well as
s
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ex ratio of the country should be considered when comparing the numbers of children of each gender. These kinds of measures should be taken into account for the betterment of the institute. In conclusion, there should be a professional system that should consider the potential or the calibre of the candidate rather than the gender they belong to which can
also
 create a difference between them.
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