Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Checking the aptitude of students is necessary for their
further
growth. Some people favour pen and paper test for their examination whilst others have contrast viewpoint.
Although
knowledge
can be tested by
this
method, I believe
this
does not judge the qualitative aptitudes of candidates.
Firstly
, written tests are theoretical but do not test practical
knowledge
. Bookish
knowledge
is not enough to be successful in life. Students after passing have to work in
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ractical world. Real work
challanges
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challenges
cannot
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aced without practical experiences. If students qualify on the basis of
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knowledge
, they will not succeed in
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eal world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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