Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is a good or bad Idea?

In
this
modern era, education is very important for
the
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future growth. Most of the students are prefer to
study
in
the
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foreign
country
nowadays. I personally think that
,
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it is beneficial for them.
This
essay will discuss why studying in
the
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different
country
is superior for the students.
To begin
with, there are numerous merits if
s
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tudent will
study
in another
nation
.
Firstly
,
this
thing will improve their knowledge about the world and
b
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etter job can be easily found by them after finishing their graduation.
Secondly
, it
make
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them independent and management skill can be easily developed in them.
As a result
of
this
, they can manage everything perfectly and it is profitable for their future success.
For example
, in many europian countries, the government are sponsoring students who are willing to
study
. So they can learn something unique. Mainly, after their
study
, they can apply many new concepts in their own
nation
and it will directly
affects
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on
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the
country
's progress ratio. If the government will encourage students for
this
than it is profitable for the society.
On the contrary
,
this
thing
also
have
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a few drawbacks. When teenagers move in
other part
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of the world for education
this
thing affects on their own
country
's
telant
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talent
. Sometimes, they
also
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drinking and smoking in foreign to become
a
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modern and it is not good for their health. Overall,
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erits of
this
thing
is
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more than demerits and parents have to send their children
in
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d
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ifferent
nation
for
the
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education. To conclude,
this
essay discussed why it is profitable for the students if they are deciding to finish their
study
in another
nation
. I believe
that is
also
good for them as well as for their family.
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