In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this

In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about
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Congestion is rapidly burgeoning in the cities, to solve
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problem, residential societies are buildings in village areas. Few people opine that
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will lead to
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estruction of the beauty of the countrysides and homes should not be built there.
Although
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equirement of land will be fulfilled, I believe the natural attractions of
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ountryside will be lost. On the one side,
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opulation is increasing with an enormous rate who require houses to live. Land in cities is limited which cannot satisfy the demand of people.
This
demand can be fulfilled by building homes in places away from cities.
For instance
, in Delhi, there is hardly any space left for construction;
however
, people are now shifting to nearby areas. If these new areas are not developed, it will be difficult for people to survive and live peacefully.
Hence
, construction in the village areas become necessary.
On the other hand
, countrysides are blessed with an abundance of natural beauty and mesmerising scenic views. Construction of new buildings will inversely
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. These
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areas
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will lose all these attractions.
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, gradually, villages and cities will be similar. Greenery and plants will no longer be visible anywhere.
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ife of people detrimentally.
For example
, areas where are less tress, people face breathing problems.
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of
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residential
properties will destruct the original importance of countries.
Hence
,
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should be stopped for the welfare of society. In conclusion, views and greenery of villages have
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myriad
of benefits for people. I believe these areas should not be
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disturbed
and their
orginality
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originality
should be maintained.
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