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Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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, computers are becoming one of the important devices for school education. In
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I want to describe some advantages and disadvantages that pupils can get when using laptops for learning. I
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ain benefit that computers can give for modern teenagers it’s a huge amount of
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 sources that they can find on the internet. If pupils want to prepare for exams or do some coursework, they will find all the
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 their laptops. Youngsters can find enough
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 for their future profession and be aimed to achieve it. According to
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omputer for self-development and education 30% often for than before.
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 they use laptops or smartphones. In modern
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we all use the internet more often for communication and the young
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 don’t have enough experience in social
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. According to the latest research of American Sociological
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eneration before. Overall, the modern
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 can be more intelligent and develop their knowledge in many spheres faster than before and computer perfect tools for it.
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we will have more younger and more intelligent workers. According to
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 from IT Security Companies, 40% of cybercrimes made teenagers.
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 can show us how youngsters increase their level of knowledge and how fast they can learn. In conclusion, computers in school education are very useful devices. In balance with physical activity and
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smarter and successful in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Edutainment
  • Multimedia resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Digital literacy
  • Cyberbullying
  • Ergonomic hazards
  • Cognitive overload
  • Technological proficiency
  • Blended learning environments
  • Instructional technology
  • Adaptive software
  • Screen time management
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