Your company holds a staff party every every in the same hotel. This time you are tasked to organize the party and you have to write a letter to the hotel's manager. Include the following in your letter. - write about your past experience with the hotel - what are your impressions with the hotel's service - what you want to ask the manager

#company #staff #party #hotel #time #manager #impressions #service

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that once again my company is planning to organise

party

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a party

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in your hotel. Every year we celebrate

company's

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staff

party

at your place and we all are happy with our past experience. Because your hotel is full with the all modern

aminities

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amenities

and

party

room is very huge and attractive.

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this

, I decided to celebrate

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once again in

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same place.

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service is excellent and all

staff

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members are very helpful. They are doing their best in a positive way, so people can enjoy properly and it makes your place unique. It would be really appreciated if you manage time for the meeting, so we can meet and finalize the price, date and

manu

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for

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. My number is 9059009876. If you want to contact me directly. Hoping to hear from you soon! Yours faithfully, RUSHI.

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