Your company holds a staff party every every in the same hotel. This time you are tasked to organize the party and you have to write a letter to the hotel's manager. Include the following in your letter. - write about your past experience with the hotel - what are your impressions with the hotel's service - what you want to ask the manager

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that once again my company is planning to organise

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party

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a party

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in your hotel. Every year we celebrate

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staff

party

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at your place and we all are happy with our past experience. Because your hotel is full with the all modern

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amenities

and

party

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room is very huge and attractive.

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this

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, I decided to celebrate

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once again in

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same place.

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service is excellent and all

staff

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members are very helpful. They are doing their best in a positive way, so people can enjoy properly and it makes your place unique. It would be really appreciated if you manage time for the meeting, so we can meet and finalize the price, date and

manu

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for

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. My number is 9059009876. If you want to contact me directly. Hoping to hear from you soon! Yours faithfully, RUSHI.

rushipatel1953Sun Dec 13 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

152 words

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