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Many students around the world are not choosing science subject at university? What are the reasons for this? What affects will this have on society?

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Technological advancements all over the world have made our lives easy. All
this
 has become possible due to
science
.
However
, the recent statistic shows that the percentage of students opting for
science
 subjects has dropped significantly.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons for the decline in the number of students and its possible impact on society. Nowadays, the focus of the young generation has shifted from serving nation towards the accumulation of wealth. They are more inclined towards selecting a field which has a more promising career in future in terms of income and power.
For instance
, a study published by a local newspaper in Karachi showed that around 70% of the school going will opt commerce in their higher studies, while 10% will go for MBBS and only the remaining will select
science
 as their major subject.
Further
, the lack of industrialisation in many
third
 world countries
also
 plays a vital role in discouraging the youth to make their career in
this
 field because of the lack of job opportunities in
this
 sector. The declining trend of choosing
science
 will adversely affect our nation in the longer run. Lack of interest of young blood will result in a slow down of new innovations due to the absence of new fresh ideas. To conclude
this
, I would say that special measures
such
 as offering scholarships should be introduced to attract the youth.
Further
 awareness sessions should be arranged in various schools to emphasize the importance of
science
 and how it contributes to the welfare of society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lack of interest
  • Perceived difficulty
  • Career opportunities
  • Rigorous coursework
  • Scientific theory
  • Uninspiring teachers
  • Outdated teaching methods
  • Cultural influences
  • Societal beliefs
  • Stereotypes
  • Financial constraints
  • Higher education
  • Prohibitive cost
  • Real-world applications
  • Enthusiasm for the subject
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