Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The society meets different obstacles in
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ifetime. A plethora of methods are used to deal with woes,
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, there are two main approaches. For some the best attitude is to accept unpleasant situations, for others
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proactive attitude is the only way to face issues. I believe that it is still better to at least strive to improve your situation as it can usually be bettered to some degree. On the one hand, it is impossible for the majority of people to change their
life
situation. Due to economic, political and environmental reasons, vast of society can only accept the conditions of living to make them feel more satisfied.
For example
, people of Bhutan are the poorest in the world. Every day they face famine, conflict and living under 2 dollars per day. Hardly does anyone complain about the tough position they are living and by accepting it Bhutan society is considered to be the happiest in the world.
On the other hand
, few would dispute that even the most difficult situations in our lives can be changed.
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, my family history after
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econd World War can be
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xample of struggle against the adversities in
life
. My grandma brought up four kids alone in the
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, where there were no job prospect or school
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nearby. To do so, she decided to left home and
traveled
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around two hundred
kilometers
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by foot to start
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ew
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in a big city and worked two shifts to change the standards of living
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and her adolescence. To conclude, there are a few circumstances where it is t would be advisable to simply accept
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because working hard enough may overcome the most difficult situation in
life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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