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Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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In the modern era, where
school
uniform
 is compulsory for students. A group of person support
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bove statement, but it gives rise to
a
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 ew question whether there should be comfort
dress
code
 for the staff of
school
? I personally support the idea of
uniform
 for the members of
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eaching institute. The following essay represents the supportive argument to my stand.
First
 and foremost argument to support my point of view is that
uniform
 removes the social differences. A student who is studying in
school
 coming from a different family background like upper
class
, middle
class
, poor
class
, different religions and different cost. All have a unique
dress
code
 which represents them. All student wearing the same
uniform
 treated equally it will not create any classification in the mind of children though they are coming from a various
class
 of society. If the teacher wears a
uniform
, it will motivate the student to do the same. So it can be a source of inspiration.
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young children have the mindset of following what their elders do. Apart from that
uniform
dress
code
 depict discipline.
Hence
 good quality can be planted in the mind of the children by a simple rule. It
also
 helps them become a better citizen in future. Nowadays many schools make a similar
dress
 for staff members. A person who works in the organization is an employee and there would be hierarchies level it will be removed by a simple rule. To put in a nutshell, numbers of advantageous of conforming
dress
code
 for teachers are represented in the above essay. It should be implemented in a
school
 located in each and every corner of the earth.
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