We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

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the world the area is not enough to accommodate.

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world countries are at their peak.

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step on m soon,it gives the ability to think out of our globe and proves the efficiency to search the other planets and universe.

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in daily life, I believe a step forward is just the beginning, and it will help

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