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The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided pie charts illustrate which things various income groups spend their earnings every month in a European country. In general, it is obvious that
while
 the
low-incomeincome
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low-income income
group
 gives the biggest sum of their money for nutrition and drinks, the
high-incomeincome
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high-income income
group
 prefers allocating their wages mostly for other different purposes.
According to
 the first chart,
although
 representatives of the low-income
group
 spend the greater part of their money on things
such
 as nourishment and fuel bills, they
also
 tend to buy varied items from diversified fields.
On the other hand
, they do not care much
for
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 paying for transportation, clothes and places to eat or to stay which make up the lowest percentage of their expenditures. As for the members of the
high-incomeincome
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high-income income
group
, the data suggest that they would rather waste their salaries on
the
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apply
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miscellaneous than any other types of purchases. Interestingly, both income groups have no intention of paying much for their clothing which constitutes only about five per cent of their
spendings
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spending
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