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Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has been observed that the activities people perform in their leisure
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 and their choices have changed over a period of
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 since it depends on the recent trends rather than a person's choice. I completely with
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 observation because people try to copy and follow famous personalities and it
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 gives them a
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 of emotional satisfaction. Most people adopt certain hobbies or areas of interest because few celebrities perform those activities.
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 appeals common man to follow those activities in their leisure
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, reading a self-help book was adapted as a hobby by many people who were inspired by Shahrukh Khan, TV Actor.
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, people make choices based on recent trends and fashions adapted by
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 famous personalities.
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, performing certain trending activities
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 provide a
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 of achievement.
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, some individuals may not be interested in performing these activities and posting on social media can give them a feeling of pride.
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, it is seen that most people run marathons and post them on social media because it gives them a
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 of achievement rather than choosing activities in their area of interest.
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, it can be said that certain hobbies are performed to provide emotional satisfaction. To conclude, activities which people perform in their leisure
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 has changed over a period of
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 and according to some people, it is because of constant change which is taking place. In my opinion,
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 view holds true because choices of hobbies and their field of interest are largely influenced by the role models and the emotional factors
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 of achievement and pride.

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