In some countries, it is difficult for family members and friends to spend enough time with elderly people to look after them. What do you think the cause of the problem? What can we do for the problem?
The spelling of aging is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It appears that an article is missing before the word actions. Consider adding the article.
The plural verb tend does not appear to agree with the singular subject young generation. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The spelling of enroll is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word enroll. Consider adding the preposition.
The singular noun decade follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.
The noun phrase government seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase family member seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The plural verb live does not appear to agree with the singular subject family member. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The noun phrase government seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase government seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.