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The use of the mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so the mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 contemporary era, technology is revolutionising every aspect of life. the mobile
phone
 is one
such
 development. It is believed that the use of the mobile
phone
 is as equivalent to smoking and to be prohibited the usage of mobile devices in public places. I disagree with the statement that, the mobile
phone
 should be banned
instead
 it can be kept in silent mode. Obviously, on one side , it is evident that
,
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 mobile
phone
 causes some adverse effect on people's health. The main reason for
this
 thought is the excessive usages of mobile cause radiation that enters the body and can cause cancer like a disease. whereas in smoking the same thing is happening. excessive smoking can result in lung cancer.
On the other hand
, it is often argued that in fact
instead
 of prohibiting , masses have the opinion that the mobile
phone
 should be kept in silence, because in a public place it creates disturbances to the other people, especially from the loud ringing tone or from the rough talking.
Next
, looking at the other fact that, mobile
phone
 is essential for communication
moreover
 it is crucial in case of emergency. It can be restricted in
such
 places like petrol pump or some places like radiology or nuclear departments. other places
such
 as devotional spots, while health care checkups can be kept in either silent or vibrant mode so that, it will not cause disturbances to others. To sum up, It is clear that, mobile
phone
 usage is inevitable in
this
 era.
However
, it's usage can be regulated in certain areas but it cannot be restricted as smoking.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antisocial
  • social interactions
  • negative impacts
  • banning
  • regulated
  • completely banned
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • responsible
  • mobile phone use
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