Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?

Shelter
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has been one of the important
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of human
life
;
however
, it has become
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ain concern in most of the continent worldwide. Major reasons for
this
are increasing
population
and cost involved in the construction of houses, while
this
problem
can be solved by
controling
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controlling
population
and making affordable houses.
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reason for
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ousing
problem
is
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the
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xponential growth of human
population
, which has made tussle among people to adjust in the available
accomodation
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accommodation
. Due to improved health system,
life
expectancy has increased dramatically as
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aresult
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result
birth and death ratio got
disbalanced
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imbalanced
which contributed to increased number resident. To solve
this
proble
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problem
, contraceptive pills should be distributed free of cost by
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overnment. Another factor for unaffordable housing is increasing cost of construction materials which make situation worst as many live their
life
bellow
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poverty line and they cannot afford building houses. These persons spend most of their
life
as a dweller. To overcome
this
situation government should impose less tax on
housing related
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comodities
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commodities
.
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, if bureaucrat would have reduced the price of concrete and bricks, many young people were able to make their dream houses. To conclude, housing has become one of the major
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in
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ontemporary world, but by
redusing
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reducing
population
growth and providing cheaper building materials
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this
problem
can be solved to a major
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