Some countries have age 4 as a minimum requirement for admission into schools, whereas other countries believe that age 7 should be the minimum requirement. What is the situation in your country? What do you think is the right age to enter schooling?

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7. I agree on the point, that children should start going to school from the

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of 4. The schooling

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will be able to communicate with classmates and teachers. The

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of 7, will have to wait for the longer time to complete their education and to get settled. Whereas in my country India, the Minimum

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is 4 for the admission in schools. Government has made the rules about the

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of admission of a

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has not completed 4 years,

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. In conclusion, I believe it is always good to send the children to school at the

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of 4

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because it increases the ability to understand the things in a better way from

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childhood. It gives the

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confidence and ability to excel in

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